Kamis, 25 September 2014

"IF" Poem


Mom and Dad
by Reiner JHG Lawalata_112014088



I love you so much
You are always present in my mind
If I were an angel, I would protect you every day 
Although I stay away from you

 I would give anything for you if I were very rich
 Your happiness is my want
 Your motivation is my need
 I just want to make you proud of me
 
  God has given me a special gift
  Yes, it is my parents
  I will always grateful to God
  Because Mom and Dad are my saving grace
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4 komentar:

  1. Yustinus Calvin8 Oktober 2014 pukul 07.51

    Hi Reiner;
    please check the second line of the first stanza and the last line of the third stanza of your poem :-) It seems that you need to add a "to be" there
    please always love your parents...and don’t forget to say thank you to them!
    -thanks-

    BalasHapus
  2. Nahason Yoafifi9 Oktober 2014 pukul 08.20

    so always love her, and make her proud

    BalasHapus
  3. Nadzifa Nur Fadila9 Oktober 2014 pukul 17.22

    Make them proud. You can do it! Don't forget to put their name in every single of your prayer :)

    BalasHapus
  4. Unknown13 Oktober 2014 pukul 19.13

    Thanks a lot for your comments
    I promise here, I never make them disappointed of me :)
    I will study hard and study smart because I know that God always with Me :)

    BalasHapus

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